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mionebristow
This missing scene is from ‘Newlywed Games’… when Jack leaves Betty and Sue in the living room discussing swatches while he lets Levi out to go help the team as they installed the spyware on Joseph’s computer.
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“So… Sue…” Betty smiled at her. “Tell me about your wedding.” She said. “We talked about how you met, but I can just imagine that your wedding was probably lovely.” She said, motioning to the picture.

Sue smiled indulgently before glancing at the picture. “Oh it was nice… we married at my church of course.” She explained, delving deep into her imagination to describe the decorations at the wedding.

Her non existent wedding.

Betty listened in quiet rapture… if she had her way, she would love to decorate for weddings, and was always interested in finding out about how other weddings looked. “And what about your reception?” she wanted to know.

“Well… we were actually really unique with that because neither of us wanted the fuss or bother of a cake… so we arranged for a local chocolatier to come in and be on hand as people helped themselves to our chocolate fountain.” Sue smiled. “Because who needs an actual cake when there’s a chocolate fountain?” She laughed.

Betty chuckled. “I just adore chocolate fountains.” She admitted. “They’re so much fun but so messy.” She made a face.

Sue nodded. “I understand completely… Which is why Jack and I had these two sweet little caramel apples done up for us. They were dipped in chocolate and looked just adorable as a little tuxedo and wedding dress.” She explained.

“Oh, I’ve seen those at the store.” Betty smiled. “They are really cute.”

Sue couldn’t have agreed more. She signed something. “Oh… sorry…” She felt her cheeks flush as she realized she’d forgotten to interpret what she signed. “He sometimes calls me the apple of his eye you know, from that Stevie Wonder song? You are the sunshine of my life…? One of the lines of the chorus is ‘you are the apple of my eye.’” She said, re-signing the phrase. “It just looks prettier when signed.” She joked.

“I think it’s wonderful.” Betty said. “Does Jack sign often?” She asked curiously.

“He signs enough.” She looked up and met his eyes as he paused in the doorway out of Betty’s view and signed something frantically to her about the team. She nodded slightly while Betty’s head was down before continuing her tale. “It was an appropriate solution for us… as well as a confirmation of how we truly feel about each other.” She directed Betty’s attention back to the fabric swatches.

“What do you think about this one?”


~Fade back into episode~


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scottiedog
This was cool, Mione, you did a wonderful job with your missing scene! autumn.gif

Loved it! smile.gif
Kav
Very clever way of fitting in those candy apples. I wonder if Jack heard enough to actually apply later on in their future? Sigh. We'll never know, will we?

kav
Josy
Very sweet Mione!!
Josy
any
Very cute way to make up a fake wedding! Just loved it, Mione! JC_cupidgirl.gif
Linny27
It was such a beautiful fake wedding.

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Lindsy
Cere Cere
Cool and lovely Mione!! Thanks!
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Tere
Red Shores Lady
Great job... JC_cupidgirl.gif Very sweet.

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theatrenut86
Oh I liked this hun! wink.gif
Frwdgranny
What a great missing scene....an undercover wedding description. I'm dreaming and making things up right along with Sue. I sure hope Jack did hear a little of that. JC_cupidgirl.gif

Thanks Mione.

Lynn

Anne
Great missing scene mione. What a nice imaginary (for now) winking.gif Wedding. Love the Bride and Groom apples to replace the chocolate fountain. I'd be heading for the chocolate but in a white wedding gown shakes head.gif that could be dangerous. giggle.gif The apples are to beautiful to eat. But they are also to yummy looking not to. autumn.gif
suesfan
Beautifully done, Mione!! I love how Sue jumped right in and made their "wedding" very believeable to Betty!! I love the idea of the apples for the bride and groom!! I also hope Jack heard enough to maybe make suggestions when the real event comes along!!!

Thanks for sharing once again!!!

Joy
Oreolover
I love how you used the picture in this MS. Perfect. The story as sweet as the apples.
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hfce
That was sweet. girl_sigh.gif



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