This is the first peice of yours i have read and i think u did a wonderful job on it!! you completly had me in the gripps of the story. I hope that u are planning on writing more, or that u have already writen more i havent found yet. you are such a great and very discriptive writer!! keep up the good work

What Can I say ? It's so a wonderful story really well written
I loved it.Continue to write stories you really have a great talent!!!
Thanks for this good moment

aww sweet
glad they stopped the terrorist and the 'replacement' kidnapper...hope he gets help or something. glad the kids were returned to their families.
aww jack got her a castle...and since she's the princess he can be her prince.